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The Overflowing Bra

Cheviot
cheviot@cheviotsplace.com
The Lost Girls: Mothers of the Apocalypse
This is a re-release of a story previously titled "The Girls". Numerous spelling, grammar and punctuation have been corrected and several other reader concerns have been addressed. Enjoy.
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Triss Morgan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Pretty good story. Entertaining and well written. I still noticed a few grammatical mistakes and Lisa's and Michelles names where switched around a couple of times.

Overall, a good read. Thank you.

MunchWolf
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Woohoo, like the name switch

DarkHeart
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Pretty good story, if an amusing twist on an old late 80's movie... :)

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