TheClause2007@yahoo.com
Part 2 of Ann's Worst Nightmare. Ann meets a stranger who changes her body and mind into her worst nightmare.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.00
Legs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This a great story, detailed and intense. I like the main character's inner turmoil over her transformation. It's well thought out and descriptive. Thanks. Please continue.
Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A well writen story with well thoughtout characters and situations, although I felt as though the BE discriptions were a little lacking in detail, it is however a minor point in an otherwise great story.
MrHymie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I simply must give this the highest rating I can....
Nothing on this board, or anything I have read in the last year, compares!
ncflasher
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
The only 3 is 'cause I found editing errors. This story punched all my buttons. What a GREAT idea to give Ann back the ability to be appalled but still subject to her 'Worst Nightmare'! Thank you for the time you spent. More? Got to know!! :>
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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