The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Sebbo
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Breakout
Strange magical balloons merge with Sophie, giving her the power to inflate.
Average Scores:

NoName
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great and long story, I hope in a continue.
The BE Description is very Good and the Characters are Nice.
The Overall is not 5 beacause the last chapter is too fast for finish the story.

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A great series (5 chapters) with likeable characters and good attention to detail. Unfortunately an open-ending to the series slightly detracts from the quality of the story as a whole.

Boobmaster
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Yah Yah Yah Hee Hee Hee, This is gonna be cool.

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