The Second Pt. Story still isn't finished, But this does a good job a carrying the story farther. Sarah finds her self changed back into a human, or is she? And she finds herself halfway across the galaxy. The cause of the end of the world is revealed, and the fate of the Earth is told.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.75
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
MrNuclear
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Reads very much like The Hitch Hikers Guide to the Galaxy.
In a very, very good way.
reader
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Someone read too much Hitch-hiker's Guide. It was painful to read at places because of the unatural effort to copy that style. I couldn't make much of it... far, far preferred the first one.
xxxecil
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great B.E., but the first one was signifigantly more erotic. The sex scene is this installment could be a bit longer.
Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked this story, but the half-successful effort to make a nod to Douglas Adams did not miss me. While the Hitchhiker's Guide had sarcasm and witty humor, this story only replicated a general sense of literal non sequiturs. It makes for a fun read, but the homage to Adams is incomplete.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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