Chronicles the four last days of the world in a dawn of the dead style situation, except there are no dead people, only people with big breasts. The survivors of the end hole up in a barn in a battle to remain fully human.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.92
- BE: 3.75
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 3.25
Spike
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved it so much. I live BE TG and multiple breats so this story just did it all for me.
Mr. Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
I enjoy lactation stories and thus I really enjoyed this one. Wish there had been more depth to the characters, but that's a small complaint as the story was a bit tongue-in-cheek. I'm not sure where the story goes from here but I want to read the sequel!!!
Kanodin
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very interesting. It's lacking something... a sequel!
XXXecil
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Ohh...that was good. A few grammatical snaffus, but immensely enjoyable. It's such a joy to find stories about a plague of lactating sluts taking over the Earth. The only thing that might improve it would be to have a few cocks survive, (even if the person owning them changed) Lessee....other than that, take more time with the B.E. Still, such a joy to read.
bfan
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
2,4,6,8,10,12, 16, 26, breast breast breast
intangir
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
The world needs more rabidly-spreading breast growth stories. Kind of like Living Dead infestation movies, but with the audience cheering for the zombies instead.
Nack
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
The story itself is a really good idea, but after a while, the BE and sex scenes seemed to be all the same. The exception here, however, is the last couple of scenes seemed to have a good flair to them. Overall though, there's really only so much you can do with large breasted lesbian scenes.
I would, however, agree with a previous poster though. Eventually the amount of breasts each person would get just seemed to be...I dunno...there's just a point when it doesn't really matter anymore. A funny spoof idea, though, and it has a lot of potential. I'd like to see a sequel, but I don't see how if all of the characters have been transformed already.
cyber620
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
very good story. needs a sequel. just like the living dead movies.
must stop. typing. in sentence. fragments.
DarkHeart
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
I couldn't get into this story mainly because something about the writing seemed very off to me and the characters weren't interesting enough for me to give a damn. As for the number of breasts on each mutant...my suggestion is to go for quality, not quantity. My suggestion is to try to proofread your stories a bit more and have someone else read them over for critiquing first.
benji dude
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Not bad, characters could have done with a bit more development I think.
Bob
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Loved it - I always love breast-growth triggered by lactation.
Soy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Absolutly loved it, this is one of my favorite storys of all time.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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