A story about Pixie, a charachter created by Access. My first BE story, too. Read, review, send commentary, do something, ok?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.91
- BE: 3.82
- Characters: 3.27
- Technical: 3.55
Tsokei
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good BE description, kind of short, loved the arousal descriptions.
DD_Redshoes
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Not a bad concept.
The problem I have is that it was far too short and did not explain why Pixie had that sort of dream in the first place. Was she teased at school, was her friends mean to her, or was it a insensitive boyfriend? How are we suposed to know if the background settings are not written.
BE as a form of torture, though not new, does have some interesting elements that could have been further explored in this story and why honey? Why not candy bars or icecream. They at least have a more erotic elements than honey does.
Perhaps the dream is like a warning of things to come in her real life. If so will she heed to the warning or ignore it till it is too late and she is unable to move because her breasts had reached a size that has pinned her to the ground. Then what will become of her? Will she finally know who has been torturing her and for what purpose.
See all these elements can be compliled to make this story a more memorable experience rather than be absorbed into the great black hole that is the archive, forgotten till someone strays accross while searching for something else.
Still not a bad story really, just needs some more imagination and the concept works.
Random
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Not bad but I've never heard of a Double B cup bra before, wouldn't she go from B to C then D? A fun read nontheless.
Random_DD
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
It was a really good story. I'm looking forward to reading this author again.
rudeypunk
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Not a bad little story with a surprise, somewhat perverse ending. The inner termoil of the pixie character seemed kind of weak. Reaching the point of exploding happens too early because she obviously was able to grow more. All that asside, I thought it was fun. Good Job.
a reader
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I have to agree that this story has a great deal of unrealized potential. The unusual nature of the main character (who I am not familiar with) is really cool. I would love to have a bit more frame story about her life before and even perhaps after the dream.
sproutsumner
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
I loved the concept of the pixy character but it'd be great if we knew more about her before the adventure began.
Breasts
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I enjoyed reading this story.
I would like to see a sequel where maybe it's not a dream and her boobs really do grow and grow....
G-man
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
God I love these eating BE stories, can't wait for the next
Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A good story overall, the boobs got a little too big for my tastes but you can't please everyone can you?
Cmdr_Mark
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A good story. Quite enjoyable.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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