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A real life story about true love, big tits, and finding "the one".
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.86
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 4.29
- Technical: 4.14
fourshot
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Daunte
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I couldn't really identify with the story at all, sorry. Reasonably well written though
Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
A nice story overall but I can't help think that it's missing something (beside the next chapter).
Grey Deth
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Flashbigger, I don't know if this is truly based on reality or not, but I love it. I don't have the exact philosophies as your character, but they are pretty close. I can relate to your character and even some of the characters surrounding him (i.e Gawd, Chaos but unfortunately not Coey). Being a romantic and a bit of an idealist myself, I really do hope your 'Quest' ends exactly they way you want it to. I'm looking forward to getting to know more. Hell, here's my email if you ever want to chat. I really loved this story (or journal, hard to tell). (greydeth@earthlink.net) Please continue!
Deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A good heartfelt story. No BE but a good read nonetheless.
patmos
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
hit wierdly close to home at some points, not how sure i like that, but if this is a true account then best of luck flash!
Kanodin
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Best line in the story: "Gawd is famous for his super poos." This is really a very good story, despite the unorthodox style. That being said, if this is meant for the OB.com, then there's a sequel in the works; there was no BE in this edition, I guess we'll have to wait... I just hope this story is not removed (I seem to remember the site developer saying something about this).
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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