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With apologies to Lewis Carroll and to brassiere size aficionados for the Bra Code Violations. I really should know better...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.70
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 3.40
- Technical: 3.90
Shaving Products For Men
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Thanks for the news! Just was thinking about it! By the way Happy New Year to all of you:D
Wayne Boich
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
i78TPY As I have expected, the writer blurted out..!
txs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Meozar
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
While Lewis Carrol might not approve, nevertheless, it's a nice rendering of the classic tale into BE.
I am impressed that the author actually used a spell checker!
Thanks for your work.
DD_Redshoes
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Yep that is certainly a story to tell the kids.
Right after you have told them about the birds and bees.
The repeatitive BE sequences got a bit tedious and I think I would have preferred her waking up with the boobs but not the mushrooms but the ending was OK .
Thankyou for the bedtime story and good luck for the next childrens story you want to BEised.
DD_Redshoes
Zoso
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
An imaginative twist on a rather loony tale to begin with.
lynxx21
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I must agree with the other posters. An interesting twist on a classic story.
Juke-Box
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Good story, but I'm quite fed-up of those "Alice in Wonderland" remakes, I've read too many of them. It also gets repetitive and predictable...
I expected something more creative, more original than this.
Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Crazy and random just like the film! An interesting and enjoyable read.
Daunte
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
As everyone has already said, the BE descriptions were a little worn out by the end, but it's still an amusing and fun read.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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