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Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.31
- BE: 4.38
- Characters: 3.88
- Technical: 3.81
HeliumGirl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
What can I say? I love this type of BE, and hope to see more.
Lighter than air fan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Yeah! This is awesome -- I love it when the inflatee gets filled up with *OOPS* too much helium! And I second the suggestion that she should do it outside next time. Maybe she could almost, very nearly float away several times, then finally get under control, only to have her partner get home, blow her up with even more helium, put her on a string, tease her mercilessly, then knowingly let her go while she panics and floats away?
Cmdr_Mark
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A likeable story. I enjoyed reading it.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Not too memorable, but it's not half bad either. :)
incirlik99
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Great BE scene! I'd like to see more from this author in the future!
Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
A few spelling/ gramma mistakes but a good quick story. I look forward to reading more this author.
DarkHeart
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
A very enjoyable story, with a nicely subtle lesson. :)
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Not bad, not bad at all :)
8008Fan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Oohlala
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
34F
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Joe Monday
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Fun story! Nicely put together.
anonimus
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Daunte
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Quite nice, I like the way she thought it was only the bra inflating, I don't know what's wrong with these idiots who give everything a 1 without even saying why.
Heliuminflater
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Love how she float helplessly up... maybe she should try it outdoor next time?
Sinenomine
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great story idea. I enjoyed reading it. I also liked her obliviousness to what exactly was inflating.
An additional enjoyable twist could be to change the instructions to tell her that in case of accidental overinflation, she could deflate (like getting the air out of a tire)as long as she did not remove the bra first. Removing the bra would "set" the inflation permanently.
Anyway, very good story!
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