crash99@online.ie
The third story by myself in this series. THis tale focuses on the lives of six normal people who experence something that will change their lives forever.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 2.71
- Characters: 2.57
- Technical: 3.29
Moisturizer For Men
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
I would add something else, of course, but in fact almost everything is mentioned!...
Wayne Boich
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
tYU9yz Post brought me to think, went to mull over!!...
Fake_Name
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Definitely not for the faint of heart.
I must admit that I found the story extremely disgusting. Multiple dicks, multiple breasts, all growiung where they shouldn't be, etc... If you loke it, that's your choice.
DarkHeart
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Your technical skills are getting better, but the story and descriptions still lack depth.
MrNuclear
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Ratboy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Really liked the idea of the image controlled transformation, you should expand on this :) keem em comming.
Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Yes there is an awful lot of potential in the image controlled changes. We the people demand more! Keep up the good work!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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