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Its about 3 months late but I finished it. A weird and wretched variation on a beloved Dickens tale. It doesn't have much BE, but it does have lots and lots of really bad jokes.
On a side note: Vanessa Williams as the Ebony Scrooge was my favorite, with her massive boobs peeking over her little red dress. Thanks for reading!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 1.67
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 4.00
the mystic
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Bloody brilliant and a nice read.
The Toymaker
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Cute. Like you said, there wasn't much BE, and most of it DID happen offstage, hence the low BE rating. The busty characters could have been explored a lil' more, at least in terms of physicality, but that's just me. There was some trouble with hononyms... "high heals" instead of "high hEEls" come most notably to mind, but I liked the writing style. As far as characters went, the story touched on the pertinent ponts of Dickens' tale, but that was pretty much it. If I lived under a rock somewhere and iddn't know the story, I might not have been as interested. But, as it was, I didn't hate it. And by the way, whatever happened to Plain Jane?
andrat2000
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
For me it was no BE.
Anyhow overall a nice story that I enjoyed. You've shorten Dickens story very well and the parallels where really nice.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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