This is the first story of three about two Salvadoran girls, cousins, who share an interesting heritage.
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Great! I can't wait for pt. 2.
PLEASE SECOND PART... PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!111
Excellent! Looking forward to the next two installments.
As good as any mainstream authors. Thoroughly good read. Leaves me waiting for the next installment. I've read this author before and I must say he is probably the best of the lot. Keep on tip tapping.
The only reason I gave you a 4 for overall is because it's only the first chapter! Great start! And I can hardly wait for the next installments.
Mina is a facinating character, and I find how she's driven to have larger breasts to be unique in the BE world. You haven't told us how the backstory connects to the present day situation, that mystery makes one focus their attention on the story looking for hints.
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Great writing, but I'm angry because some of your ideas are the same as I've had for a while now. I started writing a story in 1999 that I have recently gone back to finish and now I won't be seen as ingenious. Darnit!
I could babble on and on about all the good stuff, but mainly the descriptions about her growth and feelings stand above and beyond. I'll have to keep that in mind for my story. 5 out of 5 across the board.
Excellent!
This is just good solid writing. Aspiring BE writers take note.
I love it. It's original, and it keeps me reading. Excelent dsecription and charecters. The technical quality is superb, however I give you the benefit of my own stpidity. There is a lot of spanish in this story, and I can't read (or rather understand) a lick of it. Mind you I can pretty much figure it out, but it isn't "spelled out for me". I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Spectacularly written, her "hunger" is well spelled out. And I like how she seems to not be completely evil, (always a plus in my book). The Spanish (or salvadoran dialect of spanish) is a little tough to comprehend, can you include less in the next chapter? Otherwise, SPECTACULARLY done sir, my hat is off to you.
Holy crist man! Are you reading my mind? anyway keep up the fabu job, I'm realy digging all you stories.
Another excellent tale from the Marquis. Even better is the fact that this promises to become a series. This story has the perfect combination of mythology, scoiology, and excellent descriptions of growing breasts! The Marquis should get an award for his writing or something. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
I cant wait till the next part is ready >
I hope all the writer would have the same talents as marquize do
This is how it ought to be done! Excellent story, great writing.
a nice beginning to a good story. Good theme development.
Excellent story. Love the development of story line. Can't wait for the sequel.
Solid writing, wonderful characters. My pulse quickens in anticipation of the next chapter.
Great story, the only thing i didnt like was there was never a percise description of her current breast size. I think they only said they were bigger then mangos. Otherwise great job.
Here is an excellent first installment. It leaves me wanting more. I need to know what happens next. I want to know why only seed from gringos works or is it just blonde gringos, want to know where her aching breasts are going to lead to and so on. Please continue.
Excellent work. Time well spent in writing and in the reading. Look forward to more.
Fantastic job! I want more. I love the evolution of mina's character. Her hunger, how she becomes overwhelmed by it. She used her breasts to help her and now she is their slave! Perfect! Keep up the great work!
Huge tits that grow by drinking cum, mind controll via the huge breasts, hispanic breasts. The only way it could be better would be if you could arrange a conjugal visit.
I held off on rating this becasue I wanted to say something that hadn't been already said- but you can only say "Great job, interesting twist on the BE, can't wait for the next one" in so many ways. Seriously though, it's shaping up to be an exciting series, and the translation guide is a big help too. I gave 4's in overall and BE because despite the flavor that the Spanish adds, flipping back and forth between translation and story is a bit of a pain; and (personal opinion) I'm not TOO big on cum-drinking, but the execution outweighs it. Keep writing.
Where there ever be a continuation of this great story?
As said before, a good start, but it left me hanging!