Tracy signs up to be a test subject at Biogenetics, Inc. She has to take four pills that are orange, purple, green, and red. Guess what they do.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.17
- BE: 2.83
- Characters: 2.83
- Technical: 3.67
benji dude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A good story, nicely paced with good discriptions, it's a shame that you didn't say what Tracy did next.
beeeeeeeeeeeeelo
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
MrHHH
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Not much in the way of descriptions, the changes came fast and had almost no effect on the character besides the way she looked. Maybe the story was too short?
CGMan
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
farscaper
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Everything went by too fast. The changes especially.
EZ
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Could have used more descriptions
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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