The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Justal
The Gift
Brian finds an Altar at a construction site that endows him with strange powers.
Average Scores:

Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good start, abrupt ending.
G-man
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Keep up the great work!

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

A fairly good story all-round; though IMO the sudden ending was a bit of a let down.

andrat2000
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

It could have lasted a bit longer. I mean the story ;-)

justal
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I originally wrote the story in two parts. I will have to dig in my archives and see if I can resurrect the missing second part. I will also see if I can find some of the other dozen or so stories I wrote many years ago. - Justal

Pinto Bean
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

This classic is one of the stories that got me hooked on the BE genre.

lynxx21
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'd love to see the second part of this classic story.

Benji Dude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

There's a second part?! Post it quickly!

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