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The Overflowing Bra

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Blue Milk
""The ultimate aphrodisiac"" is how this odd milk is marketed - but it's so much more than that. It's all part of an insidious plan to take over the world!
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 Gems
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
I can't say how many times I have read this one.  Hot stuff!
 Teecee
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Wow, I really liked the style of which you wrote this.  Clever and captivating.  Nice story.
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