Able-bodied tit hound meets able-bodied woman with a secret: birth control pills grow her boobs and make her uncontrollably horny. She quit the pill after a bad experience in high school, but not before growing to a respectable size. Will she go back on the pill? Do ya think??? (Note, this version has been changed by the Author.)
This is one of the hottest stories on the site but it's do depraved, and really makes you question your fetish, and generally feel dirty afterwards. I'm not sure if there could have been a happy ending arc, Even if Patti clear headed she couldn't stay after what she did to him. Although her getting the rich boyfriend is a kick in the nuts.
I don't mind it when erotic stories get an actual plot. This made me go soft, but I kept reading through the end. I really felt something at the end there. This is an amazingly well told story that I would not have expected to see on this site.
This story depressed me badly. I come to this site for a happy ending...
Great story, except what the heck is it doing on this site? Sure there's BE in there and plenty of sex, (though not always explicit) but the story is just so damn depressing. What's the point of having the BE in there if the plot spirals downward into something that while thoughtful, different and unpredictable, nobody on here would want to read it, knowing the outcome? Don't get me wrong, it's a really well-written story in terms of technical prowess and a well thought out plot, but this is more of a depressing novel rather than an erotic story, in a sense that erotic stories don't leave the reader feeling all depressed. Sure, it doesn't always work out in the real world like what happened in the story, but that doesn't matter on this site. The fact that the two main characters developed from two genuinely loving and caring people into a sex-craved, manipulative bitch and an idiot who should've left a lot sooner and save himself some heartbreak just adds insult to injury.
Again, great story, but it probably doesn't belong on this site.
i started off liking this and as i read it it got boringly repetitive.i really despise selfish and self centered characters(patti)and that part of it ruined a great story.not enough description about her growth (height).her dumping the guy that loved her really was a kick in the ass.
This story almost reads as if it was being told by someone, and you are listening to the truth he went through.
And that is why this story is great.
This is a well-crafted story with actual character development and scorching descriptions of Patti's bodily changes. It seems a crying shame Chuck couldn't hold onto her. That aspect depressed me, and I wish it had followed a more uplifting character development arc that would allow them both to be happily together.
Not exactly the Hollywood story, but very well written and versed. From a technical standpoint, great. From an enjoyment standpoint, what happened to Chuck? I understand what happened to Patti, but I want to know how Chuck's life ended up (besides his career). I hated it. I loved it. This story is intriguing.
dth
Despite the fact that this story was incredably well writen, the characters actually developing (even if into something bad), and the plot enough to let me finish reading it.. I didn't like it.
And it's got nothing to do with skill, this time. I'm all for the Amazon trip..but did the poor guy have to lose it all? When he was so nice. Kinda a downer.
good story, even if it is supposedly based on truth. hope to read more
This is by far the best BE story I have ever read. Please make another one sometime.
Yosemite was right on for me in terms of enjoyment. Extremely well-written, creative and the characters were well-drawn, but I don't want to hear about this guy and this girl after about halfway into the story! However, I have to admit I am extremely impressed by the quality of this work and even though my enjoyment wasn't a 4/5 - dangit, I can't rate this any lower than that. It's just a terrific story.
i Love this story, it is one of my all time favorites. i would have preferred that you started off with a smaller bust size and worked your way up, but that's my only beef with this story
Exteremely well written for a BE story. The ending is a bit disapponting, but that is up to the author. The transformation of the woman is well thought out - the sex encounters are not overly explicit, enough to understand.
Thank you for an execellent story.
Kowalski, This story was the best I have read on the site so far! I am looking forward to reading all your work. I especially liked the twist of giantism. If I was to ever write an erotic short story, I would hope that it was as enjoyable. Thank you
This story was very enjoyable, i have always liked when the women grow taller, Make another, it was a good read.
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Great Story but kinda of depressing for a BE story.
Extremely well written, with plot and character development... if i didn't know better, i'd think it was a common short story rather than a piece of BE fiction.
Although an amazing piece of writing, a thorough description of actual visibly expanding tits would be great... though since it's semi-realistic, it makes sense, but a scene of visible growth with the writers obvious talent would make it a BE masterpiece.
Ending was a shock-twist... with guy losing impossibly sexy and busty nympho... good to see some variation from common story styles
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I love this story! Kowalski has a theme that runs in his stories, with his women becoming bigger, stronger, and hornier. I hope this continues into the future!
I hated it. Slowly stronger, sexier, hornier, bustier was great, the only redeeming feature. However the main male character evolves from lucky caring lover to wimpy loser, the main female character evolves from neurotic but tender companion to callous, selfish narcissist. Not a lot of pleasure gained in the story. What's to like about BE if this is the outcome?
The author has talent and the theme is sexy indeed, but with two such disagreeable main characters we the reader are left with a bitter taste. I'd say it was almost mysogynistic if it weren't that the young man was such a shlub you have to feel he deserved what he got. Did she?
Tit growth was very good - characters faltered a little bit but, hey, it didn't matter. Quality of writing was very high.
this is, more or less, my favorite story on this whole site...keep em coming kowalski!!!