The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kelly Rigman
They Grow Up So Quickly
Just a traditional straight-forward BE romp with an aggressive curvacious heroine.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

good, but too short

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Fantastic! I hope to see more from this Author!

Very Good Karma
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

The story was generally well put together. The author consciously skipped the usual set-up, for better or worse, and dived right into the action. He remembered why people were reading the story and gave good descriptions of the transformations. But I was horribly put off by that boy getting his hip broken. That sort of violence has no place in erotic fiction.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Straight sex and BE short story. Thought it was great.

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