Part one of a two part story.
Like many things part two is being written as we speak, so stay tuned.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.71
- BE: 3.57
- Characters: 3.86
- Technical: 3.29
Dave
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
So, not to put pressure on you or anything, but this was upped in 03, we are now in 08. If part 2 is being written, as you say, it's either epic, or this has been forgotten.
Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Empty file- couldn't read it, hence didn't like it.
Anonymous
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
TY
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I thought it was awesome. I really hope you finish it!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Great story! Just would have loved to have a bit more detail on the growth, but definitely excellent!! Can't wait for part two!
Ubu
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
The BE was very well managed.
I encorage the author to continue the story
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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