The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Axolotl
Unknown
180 Nights In Paradise
Young Ginnie and Paul are stranded on a island. Ginnie develops into quite a healthy young woman!
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Eddie
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Wellwritten. A little skimpy on details. Weird ending.
bill
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

nice

MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Don't we all wish we could be stuck like this?

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